Writing Portfolio
Falise - ENC 1101 - 2014
Rhetorical Analysis
Rhetorical Analysis Final Draft
Rhetorical Analysis Rough Draft
The rough draft for my rhetorical analysis project is definitely not a representation of my finest work, however I feel as though the main concepts that I planned on reviewing were present. Unlike my writing process assignment, my revisions on my draft didn't include the addition of much new material. I see this improvement from better understanding what was being expected of me as well as having a better background on the study about writing.
In my final draft, I fixed when the recording was off and when certain pictures or when certain words or concepts were repeated. I was also able to note when the dialogue for certain pictures was simply too long and I was able to condense the speech or simply add an additional photograph. The peer reviews were especially helpful to me in this assignment because many little things that I believed I could possibly improve on were all noted. For example, Jean mentioned that he believed a light background music may be beneficial to my audience, I had already begun looking for way of doing this with my program before the peer reviews had been turned in.